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the bus ride home 

a poem about the ever-present male gaze. nominated for the national voices medal out of 3,500 submissions. also received a gold key from the scholastic art and writing awards.

“You are a woman with a man inside watching a woman. You are your own voyeur.”

 —Margaret Atwood, The Robber Bride

 

legs crossed in 

spineless angel’s pose

 

fabric, lily-white, 

clinging to

smooth skin

 

to tempt is

not to be tempting. 

 

it is to wander, 

unwittingly 

yet 

willingly, 

 

in their midst. 

 

ample flesh

they scorn on

their daughters;

on the bus ride home,

exposed skin 

is a reprieve

 

look at how 

she sits,

radiating girlhood’s obscenity. 

 

lips pursed in cupid’s bow

chew the bottom one

ever-so-slightly;

 

enticing and mysterious,

had a long day at work,

now bask in the sensuality

 

soaked with perspiration

from tennis practice 

most likely

 

is it not more

exciting to

imagine sinful activity?

 

for big brother is watching you;

the big brothers of your friends,

 

the weathered man in the corner-stop

with a cane in his hands,

 

pastor, pediatrician, passengers 

and bus driver too;

 

gaze so-present

gaze so-real

 

until you close your eyes,

open them again, and

 

they

all 

disappear.

 

how long have you been home

viewing yourself

through their deluded, leery lens;

 

falling prey to

ingrained barbarities;

 

how long have you been home

repulsed by your own imagination,

not entirely far from reality.

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